April's Girls Just Wanna Paint challenge was "white". I submitted the painting "White House", (to the right) a charming bungalow in a Quincy neighborhood, which I painted from the car while the late afternoon life in the small neighborhood unfolded. There were joggers, and children on bikes, and commuters walking the few blocks from the bus, and at least two pizza deliveries, and dog walkers, and after-work gardeners. It was charming. However, the painting needed some tweaking once I got it home.
Shown to the left are the original and then the tweaked painting. The original painting was too cool, and wasn't conveying the late afternoon light. The tree was too heavy and its branches stopped arbitrarily along the roof edge, creating unintended geometry. I spent 20 minutes making a few modifications, simplifying the tree, extending its branches beyond the roof, softening the tree shadow, and warming the sunlit pieces of the house including the brick foundation. I added some blue to the roof above the porch and added a warm indication of a window or door under the porch, made a few of the houses edges more crisp, and squared off. Finished. It reads better, conveys more of a sense of time of day. Thanks for looking.